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Forsaken by *Jesi86:iconJesi86:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Fashion Portraits

©2008-2009 *Jesi86
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She softly whispered.. forsaken.. I have come for you tonight.

Photographer: :iconmrcroft:
Edit and model: me

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~capturedcreation Feb 11, 2008, 9:45:47 PM
Interesting shot. I'm not quite sure about the lighting. In some ways I like the way your face is partially hidden but I think there is a bit too much light on your chest and the eyes are drawn there a bit. I think it would have been better with a fraction more light on your face and a bit less on your body. Just a thought though. Love the concept and the variety of your work.

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=shadowsAndPixels Feb 11, 2008, 9:49:07 PM
ooh wow!
I think this has to be my fav of *mrcroft's shots. The contrast is just right imho.
I find myself squinting to see if I can see your other eye, which is a good thing imho lol.

The only suggestion I would have, if I may, is that stray hair above your left eye is a little distracting and may be a candidate for editing out?
Great image none the less, well done :)

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*Jesi86 Feb 11, 2008, 9:51:28 PM
hmm i see what u mean about the hair, ill remove it when i get a chance. thanks for pointing it out.

also u'll be happy this is the first of many good shot to come from our last collaboration, ill post more when u finish edting them.
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*Jesi86 Feb 11, 2008, 9:51:58 PM
thanks for the feedback :)
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~Mattman24 Feb 12, 2008, 12:01:09 AM
Beautiful :heart:

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~loanwolf Feb 12, 2008, 2:29:15 AM
very nice image and i like the top your wearing but i think it needs a couple more slices in the front
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~TwilightsBlood Feb 12, 2008, 4:13:54 AM
Seems like you've found a perfect balance between the light and dark, enough so that it seems reality has been torn away and you've become Forsaken. great picture, very beautifully taken

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*dancers-avatar Feb 12, 2008, 6:36:42 AM
i agree with shadowsandpixels on the hair above the left eye. otehrwise, i dunno if there is anything that is less than perfect bout this. it IS a very nice concept and shot. maybe you could play around with the lighting a bit but i dunno. this looks really good as it i think. nice work.

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~Mikacouli Feb 12, 2008, 6:45:31 AM
nice lighting, nice picture ;)
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